darkjhedi
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I have the MIND of a TIGER but the HEART of an EAGLE!
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Post by darkjhedi on Jul 30, 2005 5:43:14 GMT 8
[glow=red,2,300]Here's a song that I've been tinkering with. Comments are encouraged When You Said Goodbye I never thought this would end I thought we would love each other 'til time ends I wanted to be with you forever but your heart was still on your last lover Refrain I'm staring blankly at the sky Remembering the first time you said hi I felt my heart skip a beat I felt the air escape my lips Chorus 1 When you said goodbye My whole world started to crumble in front of my eyes I coudn't speak right, I coudn't stand upright Questions linger in my mind The answers I want to find As my tears fall like the raindrops from the storm I lie still on the floor Thinking about you and me Thinking about what used to be What might have been, What could have been Repeat Refrain Chorus 2 When you said goodbye My whole world started to crumble in front of my eyes I coudn't think right, I coudn't eat right Questions linger in my mind The answers I cant to find I don't want to feel this again I can't bear this pain again Too many emotions I feel Too little time for me to heal Never Again (3x) Will I feel this way again Repeat refrain then chorus 1 & 2 Questions linger in my mind The answers I think I've found... [/glow]
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kixs
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Chocnut...
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Post by kixs on Aug 25, 2005 20:36:15 GMT 8
dis 1s caLLd Juliet Smile.. Hope U lyk
VerSE 1 On This Night of dragonflies fReezing In THe CoLd I Find I'm burNing in The Heat of Passion Lyk the Sun
'Tis thiS lovE ive found thAt KeepS me Safe & Sound Asleep In arms Such As youRs
Refrain And Ive faLLen for This dame so Fine That I endlessly wiSH to be MiNe
ChORus: And Such a Passion Madness others DARE not speak Ive found to Be in ME
And if the World Would SomeTiME fall I Know My loVE Will still be theRe And My heart StILL BEAT for You
Verse 2 By the WoRd from the scarLet LIPS of thiS Maiden So GraceFul Arise fair Sun And kill The Envious mOon
Tis the BrightneSS of Her Cheeks That SHames ThE StArS Tis Her sOft Juliet SMILE That restores Dry Streams
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kixs
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Chocnut...
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Post by kixs on Aug 25, 2005 20:48:39 GMT 8
dis One's A little SumthinG i Call MORE THAN EVER
Verse 1
Let me Falter in you light i long to see you Smile this melancholic Atmosphere aInt for mE
LacOnic I may bE aLL my wOrds lost In space so Let this kiss spEak all it Must
Refrain: Of how i need you more than ever tonight 2x
the Moon speaKs of Your beaUty I believe anyway cUz in my Heart i Know it's true
the stars share BouT your tear Filled eyes thAt's why i want to be right next to you
repeat refrain
Chorus:
let me get losT in Your Love and Never be fouNd again cuz I wanna stay Lyk thIs with You
Keep YouR Hand in MiNE and Rest Your HEad on my Shoulder and breathe in this tym let Fate Have its way
Coz I Need you MORE THAN EVER, Tonight
verse 2 Confetti of MemoRies shower gently On Us as FireFlies dance in Dim Light of a Sunset Painted sky
the NORTH STAR i see it seeMs to smile at the Sight of lovers on a rOOftop worries of theIr Mind
refrain 2: and i cant Keep you out of my SiGht 2x
repeat chorus
Bridge":
counTless nights iVe lost sleep gazing at The sKy the Heavens remind me of your of your eleGance and Grace
And heavenly hostS take flight To wacth Over us toNight
repeat choRus 2x[/color]
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Post by alwyn317 on Aug 26, 2005 10:54:14 GMT 8
darkjhedi, ok ung message nung kanta mo. the problem with it is that medyo cliche na yung mga lines. hehehe. creative criticism lang tol ha... anyway, it would help if you would start to put in images that describe the feeling. yun lang po.
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darkjhedi
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I have the MIND of a TIGER but the HEART of an EAGLE!
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Post by darkjhedi on Aug 29, 2005 5:26:29 GMT 8
darkjhedi, ok ung message nung kanta mo. the problem with it is that medyo cliche na yung mga lines. hehehe. creative criticism lang tol ha... anyway, it would help if you would start to put in images that describe the feeling. yun lang po. [glow=red,2,300]Thanks for the feedback "tol" hehehe... ;D [/glow]
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Post by buchoi on Sept 1, 2005 17:13:50 GMT 8
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Ninuno
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NINUNO... nabosohan ko sila eba at adan
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Post by Ninuno on Sept 16, 2005 10:07:43 GMT 8
Hey Guys!!! wala na sigurong nakakaalala sa akin dito!!! tagal ko nang d nag post eh... hahaha... so anyway... ito muna post ko... isang tula na nagawa ng aking kaibigan habang siya ay bangag sa pag-ibig... at ang tulang ito ay ginawa nang kanta ng banda namin... hehehe... enjoy...
Title: Mahal pa rin Kita Written by: Lowell Composed by: Ian
Siguro nga ikaw ay nagbago Pagmamahal sa akin ay tila naglaho Turing sa akin ay parang iba nang tao Ganito ba sa akin ay ganun na lang ang pagtrato
Paano na ang ating nakaraan Ang ating mga suyuan at mga lambingan Ganoon lang ba sa iyo kadali ang lumimot Kung baliwalain ay parang basurang kakarampot
Refrain: Ako man iyong ibaon sa limot At mayroon ka nang ibang mahal Huwag mo sanang kalimutan At lagi mong tandaan
Chorus: (2x) Minsan na kitang minahal At hanggang ngayon ay mahal pa rin kita
Pinilit kitang layuan at limutin Ngunit hindi ko ito kayang gawin Pero bakit ganito ang buhay Ano ba ang nakita sa iyo At baliw na baliw ako
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lawks_fuster
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Post by lawks_fuster on Nov 9, 2005 21:09:50 GMT 8
Anino Hindi humihiwalay lagi mong kasama Anumang galaw lahat ay nagagaya Sa galaw ng ilaw at galaw ng katawan Anino ko’y laging nasa kaganapan
Ano ang buhay kung walang anino Kasama mo sa buhay at sa buong mundo Sa tawanan at iyakan palaging nakagabay Wala mang kibo’y kanyang tunay na kulay
Ikaw ay aking anino Takbuhan ng buhay ko Nariyan ka kapag kailangan ko Kasiyahan ma’t kalungkutan ng biyayang na ito
Pero nasaan ka ngayon? Tuluyan mo na ba akong iniwan? Akala ko ba’y sasamahan mo ako Pero ngayon kahit paalam ay wala
Nalulungkot ako, nag-iisa ngayon Walang kasamang anino Walang saysay ang buhay pag wala ka Pero anong ginawa mo?
Tuluyan mo na nga akong iniwan Pagkat nakatago ako sa silid ng kadiliman Kahit katiting na liwanag ay wala Kawalan mo’y tunay na nakakapariwara
Bakit ka biglang nawala? Bakit sa akin pa ginawa? Hindi ako masaya, hindi ako masaya Pagka’t di ko nararamdaman ang iyong presensya
Kailan ka babalik sa aking buhay? Nawawalan na ako ng pag-asa sa paghihintay Mamatay ba ako nang wala ka na? O babalik ka pa ngunit ako’y patay na?
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darkjhedi
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I have the MIND of a TIGER but the HEART of an EAGLE!
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Post by darkjhedi on Nov 13, 2005 5:18:03 GMT 8
[glow=red,2,300] Here's a poem I wrote when I was sad over an incident with a "friend"...Btw could someone give me a title for this? Thanks ;D
Why do you compliment me When you’re just going to insult me? Why do you lift me up When you’re just going to let me fall? Why do you let me hope When you’re just going to disappoint?
Who am I to you? What am I to you? How do I fit in your life? When was I included in your life?
I tried to get closer to you But something happened That I never expected That I never wanted
I opened up my heart to you But it meant nothing to you I thought you were different But you were indifferent
Now my heart is bleeding Because I see you leaving Leaving my circle of friends Without us making amends This brings tears to my eyes ‘cause I hate goodbyes But I guess this is goodbye...
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clarie
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A falling star. Least I fall alone.
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Post by clarie on Nov 19, 2005 16:04:53 GMT 8
just something I wrote po.
*My death was your missing part And mine was your happiness The only way to make you happy, is for me to die Death shall take me and now, We're both complete*
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Post by Mich=) on Dec 4, 2005 14:04:07 GMT 8
[glow=red,2,300]s2c2
Napakasayang mga araw Akala’y di na papanaw Pinalagpas at lumuwag ang saklaw Mundo’y sa ligaya lamang pinagalaw.
Nandito na si kamatayan Hindi na mapipigilan Kaluluwa ng puso ay isinama Lahat ay nawalan na ng halaga.
Isip na lamang ang ginamit Katotohanan ay ayaw nang harapin Nagbulag-bulagan na At nagsuot na lamang ng maskara.
Panahon ay pinalipas Hindi pa rin naligtas Nananabik ngunit walang magawa Kundi manalangin at umasa.
Nalalapit na ang araw ng paglisan Hindi na ito mapipigilan Bato na ang damdamin “Alaala ng samahan ay aanhin?”
12/4/2005 12:35-12:49 a.m.[/glow]
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Post by singquenta on Dec 10, 2005 23:01:23 GMT 8
try to judge if u think this song's a bore or not...
frolic across these fields only to find the grass not green the silence so uncontrolable makes the opaque unseen
the first sunlight may it shine but curse such endless pain that I find only in your presence for my heart's now full of stains
Refrain: what have I done to make you make me broken unattached from myself? call it destiny for us if you must but I believe pain can never be right
Chorus: feel the way I make my move the soul I bear will blow winds of truths See how much I was obssessed with you and try to see you were meant for me
but what has passed is a circumstance we cant undo
I'm afraid of what tomorrow will seem like red sunsets make me hate the next day only your love would keep me from the cold it's a shame you had to go away ewan ko kung ano 'yon... song ba 'yon o wlang kwentang collage of words? panget nga e..
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Post by shai13enna on Dec 18, 2005 16:52:55 GMT 8
i'm gonna post the story i wrote soon...
hehe...
nice work poh!
galing nyong lahat...
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kooksü*
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Post by kooksü* on Dec 28, 2005 11:09:05 GMT 8
Ginawa ko ito nung kasagsagan ng bagyo nung kelan lang. Heehee. Alam ko ang corny pero gusto ko lang ishare ;D
Raindrops
As I write on this paper There's nothing I can hear Except the raindrops Falling from the sky
I looked at the window And watched every raindrop that falls I glanced at the street I see children playing with their bare feet
It's so terrible that it rains Even if you're riding a train, The happiness that it brings Helps you remove that pain.
;D
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kooksü*
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Post by kooksü* on Jan 1, 2006 23:08:50 GMT 8
Another one. Gusto ko lang ipakita sa inyo yung kalokohan na ginawa sa Chemistry homework ko. Hahahaha.
Atoms! Oh Atoms!
Oh Atoms~ Oh Atoms! The reason why I am Here, standing oh so free Is all because of thee
Your structure that builds me to be strong and makes everybody free for so long How can I ever thank thee If you are so tiny?
The proton & electrons you supply And the neutron you give and apply The chemists who made you shine Dalton, Bohr, Stone, Goldstein
I got a gazillion of you In everything that I do No matter where you are from You are my life, oh atom!
aba nagbboost ang writing capabilities ko ah Wenk! u**l haha
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